Loss of faith

[IBM]

Sunflowers woke up on dawn
As her beauty rose
And mingled in the scent
Of dew and fresh grass.

The observer might question this
Why the naivety of the Chosen Man
Of own his world is bounded to soul
Like nails on Christ hands.

"Open your eyes foolish creature"
Shouted the wicked evil demon
"Suffer for your sins and vanity"
"You're worse than a old blind"

Enslaved the Man struggled in vain
His destiny was a minded sodom
Thoughts will never be broken
His eyes gaze the glittering sky

:cry:

 

[hairwegoagain]

You need to see someone.

 

[IBM]

:cry: :cry: :cry: :cry:

 

[Guest]

waiting for taug to jump in this thread. there can be a western european cry section

 

[Nathaniel]

Ever consider getting some titay or some pusay?

Best thing you can do for depression.

 

[Aplunk1]

You didn't write this, IBM.

The grammar and understanding of English is too prevalent in this piece.

 

[Captain_Charisma]

Sunflowers woke up on dawn
As her beauty rose
And mingled in the scent
Of dew and fresh grass.

that first part sounds like a commercial for:

-a fabric softener

-a feel good pill...like Zoloft or some sh!7 like that

-FDS

 

[IBM]

You didn't write this, IBM.

The grammar and understanding of English is too prevalent in this piece.

What do you mean i didnt write that? It have very typos?

I wrote that. Please dont annoy me.

 

[UK1]

I didn't realise that you actually wrote the poetry that you posted, nice one, I like it.

 

[WorldofWarcraft]

If IBM wrote the poem, it would go like this:

Rogain wake the dawn of hair
Its beauty rose
And mingled are the scent of Keterozone 1%
Of dew and fresh green tea leaves.