My Rap about male pattern baldness

[Aco_KK]

I rap...so now... I hope people can relate to this

When the coin of life was thrown I wish I was given a fair toss
but instead it landed on a head with noticeable hair loss
19 years later it's like my heads taken repeated chair shots
As this happens my confidence is immensely volatile
as this methodical testosterone hits my sensitive follicles
I shudder the day when it turns my identity comical
So now I'll just cry and rub my hair with repetitive topicals
I hate how I can see the complexion of my scalp in the mirror
Life has given me lemons, I was born the lemon; all bitter
Been squeezed and my juices used to marinate the better looking
Coz i'm a target to point at, they're feeling good while I'm sooking

Maybe it's cognitive distortions thats led to my misfortunes
or this torsion in my brain thats making me feel unimportant
I'm like an ocean dweller looking for a cure from potion sellers
finding the panacea is like thinking the words open sesa...
me will work and you'd think we'd give up hope... but we don't

I hate being totally held captive to my own insecurity
because I can tell people are looking in a form of scrutiny
It could be a disorder I'm facing or I could be a lunatic,
or through years of indulging my minds in a mutiny
saying "why didn't you take care of yourself from puberty"
the benefits could be lucrative and you could live
a normal life now

 

[cuebald]

unk: unk: unk: excellent mate. I'm guessing you do rap outside of hair loss boards too? :notworthy

it does put in to words what hair loss can do to somebody. There aren't enough songs about male pattern baldness...

 

[Aco_KK]

Thats right dude, I can write rhymes for anything... I don't do one syllable rhymes either WAY too basic. If i was just venting and not a rapper you'd see

strand rhyming with hand...and bed with head.

But me:

DHT has realleee aged me.

My goal in life is to be a lawyer (in law school atm)

But i'm pretty good at writing rhymes. Trying to find my "flow" for my vocals too.

So yeah...I could go on and on.

 

[Draco88]

That was awesome

 

[GeminiX]

Just a thought, why not start a You Tube page and put some of your work up there?