I sent an email to a band to ask them if they would collaborate with me to create a song. They're an up and coming female band. I selected a female band because it stretches my writing talent to write out of character. Since I'm a guy, writing a lyric for a female band obviously pushes me way out of my own character.
At any rate, they have invited me to send one lyric to them. Could I get you to look it over and inform me any weaknesses that you see in it. Maybe I'm not as good as I think I am and if I'm not I need to find that out.
I used to have females in my life to talk to about this stuff to but the females are all gone. Maybe they only liked my writing because they had crushes on me.
Anyone else who would be willing to assess any weaknesses in the lyric let me know.
At any rate, they have invited me to send one lyric to them. Could I get you to look it over and inform me any weaknesses that you see in it. Maybe I'm not as good as I think I am and if I'm not I need to find that out.
I used to have females in my life to talk to about this stuff to but the females are all gone. Maybe they only liked my writing because they had crushes on me.
Anyone else who would be willing to assess any weaknesses in the lyric let me know.